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This is the first non-fanfiction thing I've written in quite a while. It's about a cab horse who is affected by the classic "something in the water" thing. Hopefully you'll think the story is better than I can explain.
Written for 's "Easy Being Evil" contest: [link]
Now the only question is, is the horse the evil one because she drank the water in the first place, or is it her unknown tormentors who are truly the bad guys?
The cabbie is named what he is because I like Irish names like Ian, and I actually had a great-great-great-great grandmother from Ireland named Elizabeth Riley, who I obviously didn't know because she was alive just a "wee bit" before my time.
For those of you "horse buffs," please forgive any behaviors of these animals that I may have incorrectly portrayed in this story - it's a horror fic, and I'm kindly asking for temporary suspension of disbelief.
And... I think that's all I have to say. If you have any questions, as always, ask me.
Oh, yeah - this was partially inspired by the films Black Beauty (a classic for horse lovers, really sad) and The Brothers Grimm (you'll never look at the Gingerbread Man the same way again after you see it, I guarantee you).
This is my writing, don't steal please.
Okay, I'll shut up now. Enjoy!
Written for 's "Easy Being Evil" contest: [link]
Now the only question is, is the horse the evil one because she drank the water in the first place, or is it her unknown tormentors who are truly the bad guys?
The cabbie is named what he is because I like Irish names like Ian, and I actually had a great-great-great-great grandmother from Ireland named Elizabeth Riley, who I obviously didn't know because she was alive just a "wee bit" before my time.
For those of you "horse buffs," please forgive any behaviors of these animals that I may have incorrectly portrayed in this story - it's a horror fic, and I'm kindly asking for temporary suspension of disbelief.
And... I think that's all I have to say. If you have any questions, as always, ask me.
Oh, yeah - this was partially inspired by the films Black Beauty (a classic for horse lovers, really sad) and The Brothers Grimm (you'll never look at the Gingerbread Man the same way again after you see it, I guarantee you).
This is my writing, don't steal please.
Okay, I'll shut up now. Enjoy!
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I was totally thinking of the horse scene in Brothers Grimm when was reading this. I really really liked this piece though (I almost typed PENIS on accident ) It's really intriguing (SP? stfu it's late so that = INCORRECT SPELLING) and I agree with ~MCRizLIFE that you should write MOAR!!!
I also get what your sayin when you write snippets of something (no I wasn't stalking your previous comments....maybeh...) I HATE THAT!!! Thats why I cant write ANYTHING lately! That's all that comes out!!! :can'tfindiconofstabbingselfsoImadethisoneup:
I also get what your sayin when you write snippets of something (no I wasn't stalking your previous comments....maybeh...) I HATE THAT!!! Thats why I cant write ANYTHING lately! That's all that comes out!!! :can'tfindiconofstabbingselfsoImadethisoneup: